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Understanding written english











CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
1.1  Background
English is the most widely used by the countries in the world and become a commodity that language must be owned and controlled by most people in the world. Many residents in various countries in the world to wear the English language as a communication tool in the important international meetings. Mastery of English is very important because almost all global resources in various aspects of life using English. (Richards & Rodgers, 1999)
Basic sentence construction is something learned in begining English language courses; however, as life happens and time goes by, many of these first learned English fundamentals begin to elude us (Quick Study Academic: English Grammar & Puntuation, 2013)
Learning and understanding English becomes a necessity that can not be avoided. By learning English, someone will open horizons and knowledge internationally. English has the function and big role. One of the implications that looks are more people are trying to learn to master English. (Crystal, 2001)
One of the things that can not be separated from learning to master the English language is to understand the way of writing. Writing in English is a skill that is most difficult because it must have sufficient capacity corresponding rules of the English language. Some of the points that must be understood in writing English that clause, types of sentence, and correction symbol (Anker, Susan. 2009)
Sentence is an organized series of words that allows you to make a statement, ask a question, express a thought, offer an oppinion an ideas (Marchel Danesi, Ph.D., 2006).
The English Sentences is an amazing thing. It has a limited set of distinct part (phrases and clauses), but these parts can be strong together and rearranged in a seemingly endless variety of ways. Furthermore, there is an incredible volume of words from which a writer can draw. This flexibility of parts and variety in vocabulary make it possible to write a sentence that no one has ever written or even spoken before (Brian Backman, 2008).
To achieve a good quality of writing, needed an effort for perfection in accordance with procedures English writing. To produce the correct of writing, is not easy in the process. Certainly found errors in the way of writing. To investigate faults, takes symbol aimed at marking the wrong points (Maarek, 2009
1.2  Purpose
1.2.1 General Purpose
    To demonstrate and explain about the sentence structure in English
1.2.2 Specific Purpose
1. Students can understand the concept of understanding written English
2. Students can understand the concept of understanding written information
1.3  Benefits
Students know and understand penggunaam sentence structure in English and understanding written English



CHAPTER 2
PRESENTATION TOPIC
A. Clause and Sentence Structure
1. Clause
Clauses are the building blocks of sentences. A clause is a group of words that contains a subject and a verb. Adjective: clausal (Sidney Greenbaum and Gerald Nelson, 2009). An examples:
Clauses                                                                       Not Clauses
Subject                     Verb
Ecology    is a science                                     To protect the environment

                Subject        Verb
Because pollution     causes cancer                 A fter working all day





Reference:  Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education

1.1 Function of Clause
Clauses that function as verb clause, noun clause, adjective clause, and abverb clause (Hopper, 1999)
1.      Text Box: Adjective ClauseVerb Clause
Verb clauses perform verbal function, verbal function correspond to the forms of sentences in English (Marchel Danesi, Ph.D., 2006)
·              Declaration Statement (declarative sentence)
·              Question (interrogative sentence)
·              Command (imperative sentence)
All sentences contain at least one verb clause. Verb clauses are also referred to as main clauses.
2.      Noun Clause
Noun clauses begins with a wh- question word, that whether, and sometimes if. A noun clause acts like a noun; it can be either the subject or an object of the independent clause  (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007)
For example, the following italicized clauses are examples of noun clauses:
·         The library will send a bill to whoever damaged this book.
·         Whether you will pay for the damage is not even a question.
·         The judge has given that you behaved well after your arrestsome consideration.
Noun clauses perform nominal functions, or functions prototypically performed by noun phrases. The nine main functions of noun clauses in English grammar are: (Nelson, Gerald. 2011)
1.      Subject
2.      Subject complement
3.      Direct object
4.      Object complement
5.      Indirect object
9.      Appositive.
3.      Adjective Clause
Adjective clauses atcs like an adjective; that is, it describes a noun or pronoun. An adjective clausevbegins with a relative pronoun such as: are who,whom, that,  which, whose, when, and where (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007)
For example, the following italicized clauses are examples of adjective clauses:
·       The woman that works in the cafe  is my aunty.
·       Last year we vacation in Raja Ampat, which features excellent scuba diving
·       The restaurant where you left you purse is known for its unique pasta dishes.
The primary grammatical function of adjective clauses is noun phrase modifier. Noun phrase modifiers are defined as words, phrases, and clauses that describe or modify a noun phrase. Adjectives clauses may also, although rarely, function as verb phrase modifiers, prepositional phrase modifiers, and noun clause modifiers.
Adjective clauses are also referred to as relative clauses. The subordinating conjunctions that introduce adjective clauses are also called relative pronouns.
4.      Adverb Clause
Adverb clauses acts like an adverb; that is, it tells where, when, why, and how. An adverb clause begins with a subordinator, such as when, while, because, although, if, so, or, that (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007)
For example, the following italicized clauses are examples of adverb clauses:
·            After she gave the baby a bath, she decided to take a nap.
·            The girl cannot usually eat beef stew because she is allergic to carrots.
·            The couple has been saving money so that they can go on a vacation.
All adverb clauses perform the grammatical function of adjunct adverbial. Adjunct adverbials are words, phrases, and clauses that modify or describe an entire clause by providing additional information about time, place, manner, condition, purpose, reason, result, and concession (Nelson, Gerald. 2011).



1.2 Types of Clause
There are 2 types of clauses in English: Independent Clause and Dependent
Clause (Obrecht, 2000)










 Reference: Obrecht, Fred. 2000. Minimum Essential of English second edition. Chicago. Barron’s Educational Series,Inc

1.2.1 Independent Clause
An Independent clause contains a subject and a verb and expresses a complete thought. It can stand alone as a sentence by it self. An independent clause is formed with a subject and a verb and often a complement (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
Independent clause can stand alone as a sentence, begining with a capital letter and ending with terminal punctuation such as period. An independent clause also known as a main clause at sentence (Gary Lutz, 2005).
 





Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education



Example:
Water     evaporates    rapidly in warm climate zones


1.2.2 Dependent Clause
A dependent clause has a subject and a verb too but does not express a complete thought, so it is not a sentence by it self. A dependent clause is also called a sentence fragment. By it self, it is an incomplete sentence, and it is an error. A dependent clause begins with a sub ordinator such as when, while, if, that or who (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
Dependent clauses are statements that have a subject and predicate but are made subordinate to the independent clause to which they are attached (Obrecht, Fred. 2000)
There are two types of dependent clauses: noun clauses (nominative dependent clauses) and modifiying clauses. Modifiying clauses can be either adverbial or adjectival. Furthermore, if the modifying clause is adverbial, it is introduced by a subordinating conjunction; if the modifying clause is adjectival, it is introduced by a relative pronoun (who, whom, whose, which or that),or by a relative adverb (when, where, why) (Gary Lutz, 2005).
 


Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education
Example:
Because       water        evaporates           rapidly in warm climate zone
           
1. Noun Clause
a noun clause is a subordinate clause used as a noun. Within a sentence, it may be used as the subject, the direct object, a predicate noun, or an objective complement. Noun clauses are usually headed by one of the following words: that, who, whoever, whom, whomever, what, whatever. Because they are nouns, they frequently become part of the basic structure of an independent clause (Obrecht, Fred. 2000).
Noun clauses, which function gramatically as nouns:
Example:
They knew that the gun was loaded
The clause which underline have a functions as the direct object of the verbs in the main clause

What i want for Christmas is a tool box
The clause which underline have a functions as the subject of the verb in the main clause
2. Adjective Clause
An adjective clause is a subordinate clause used as a adjective. Within a sentence, it ussually located adjacent to the word it modifies. Adjective clauses are usually headed by one of the following words: who, whom, whose, which, that. (Obrecht, Fred. 2000).
Adjective clauses, which function grammatically as adjective. Remember that adjective modify (or describe) nouns. In the same way, an adjective clause gives additional information about a noun (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
Example:
The man who is raking the lawn is my uncle Bill
The clause which underline gives additional information about the noun man
Is Stanford the school that you want to attend?
The clause  which underline modifies the noun school
3. Adverb Clause
An adverb clause is a subordinate clause used as an adverb. Adverb clauses are usually headed by a subordinating conjunction such as if, unless, because, before, after, since, as. Because they are adverbs, they are the most movable of modifiers, and can appear in various positions throughout the sentence. Remember that all adverbs, including adverb clauses, answer the questions how, when, where, and why about the verb (Obrecht, Fred. 2000).
Examples:
Because it was so cold that night, Stan started up the main  furnace
The adverb clause which underline tells why he start up the main furnace
I will give you a gold pocket watch when you graduate from high school
The adverb clause which underline tells when will give a gold pocket watch
2. Sentence Structure
Grammar deals with the rules for combining words into a larger units. The Largest unit that is described in grammar is normally the sentence. Sentence is an organized series of words that allows you to make a statement, ask a question, express a thought, offer an oppinion an so on. In writing, a sentence starts with capitalized word and ends with a period, a question mark, or an exclamation mark (Marchel Danesi, Ph.D., 2006).
This is a national definition about sentences : it defines a term by the the notion or  idea it conveys. The difficulty with this definition lies in fixing what is meant by a ‘complete thought’ (Sidney Greenbaum, 2009)
The Building blocks of grammar are sentences, clauses, phrases and words. These four units constitute what is called the gramatically hierarchy, So sentences are at the top and the largest units of the grammatical hierarchy (Gerald Nelson, 2011).



And there is a represent the hierarcy schematically: 


A sentence represents an eventuality. An eventuality is an action or an event or a state of affairs: something that happens or something taht is. The sentence represents an eventuality by separating out the type of eventuality from the abstract or concrete things which are involved in the eventuality. The type of the eventuality is prototypically represented by the verb (Nigel Fabb, 2005)
Sentences have two basic parts at least:  a subject and a verb. The subject is the part of sentence that denotes the action or what the sentence about. It is often the first element in a simple sentence such as a direct statement. The verb is the part of a sentence that provides information about the subject, in simple sentences it comes after the subject (Marchel Danesi, Ph.D., 2006).
Each combination of subject and verb is called clause. The sentence consisting of one or more clause (Marchel Danesi, Ph.D., 2006)
Here the sentence as a whole contains the “sentence-like” construction, we refer to this construction as a clause:
Sentences
 







Clause
Text Box: Reference: Nelson, Gerald. 2011. English an Essential Grammar 2nd edition. New York. Routledgewhen the plane landed, the ground crew removed the cargo.
In sentences consisting of more than one clause, there is a main clause, called Independent Clause, and one or more subordinate clauses, called Dependent Clauses (Marchel Danesi, Ph.D., 2006). Different types of sentences are made up of different combinations of these two types of clauses(Fred Obrecht,  2000)
Every sentences is formed from one or more clauses and expresses a complete thought. The four basic basic kinds of sentences in english are simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex. The kind of sentence is determined by the kind of clauses used to from it (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
2.1 Types of Sentence
2.1.1 Simple Sentence
A simple sentence is a sentence is a group of words with a subject and verb expressing one complete thought. The simple sentence has other names: Independent clause is the most common, althought simple clause is frequently used (Fred Obrecht,  2000).
A simple sentence is one independent clause (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
Text Box: Formula: 
Subject	+	Verb			(Complement)
 





Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education
Example:
Text Box: ComplementText Box: VerbText Box: SubjectFreshwater        boils         at 100 degress Celcius





2.1.2 Compound Sentence
The compound sentences consits of at least two simple sentences joined by mean of a coordinating conjuction (Fred Obrecht,  2000).
A compound sentence is a sentence consisting of at least two independent clause and no dependent clause. In a compound sentence, all of the independent clauses receive equal emphasis and are of equal emphasis and are of equal importance (Gary Lutz, 2005).
A compound sentence is two or more independent clauses joined together. There are three ways to join the clauses: (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
1. Compound sentences with coordinator
There are seven coordinators, which are also called conjunction. You can remember them by the phrase FANBOYS (For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So). The following sentences ilustrate the meaning of the seven FANBOYS coordinator. There is comma after the first independent clause (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
A compound sentence can be formed as follow
Text Box: Formula: 
Independent Clause + Comma (,) + Coordinator  +  Independent Clause
 





Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education
Example.:
Text Box: Independent Clause
 



Salt water boils at lower temperature than freshwater, so
 



food cooks faster in salt water




2. Compound sentences with conjunctive adverbs
A second way to punctuate a compound sentences is to insert a logically appropriate conjunctive adverb (or transitional phrase) between the two independent clauses. A semicolon  (;) will precede the conjunctive adverb, and coma will follow it. (Gary Lutz, 2005).
Text Box: Formula: 
Independent Clause+Semicolon (;)+Conjunctive adverbs+Comma (,)+  Independent Clause

A compound sentence can be formed as follow




Reference: Lutz, Gary and Stevenson, Diane. 2005. Grammar Desk Reference: The Definitive Source for Clear and Correct Writing. Ohio. The Writer’s Digest
Text Box: Conjunctive AdverbsText Box: Independent ClauseExample
 



Jennifer work for a mortage company; however,
Text Box: Semicolon (;)
Text Box: Comma (,)
 



she’s looking for a less stressful job

3. Compound sentence with semicolon
A third way to from a compound sentences is to connect two independent clauses with a semicolon (;)alone. This kind of compound sentence is possible only when the two independent clauses are closely related in meaning. If they are not closely related, they should be written as two simple sentence, each ending with a period (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).




Text Box: Formula: 
Independent Clause	  +  Semicolon (;)  +  Independent Clause
 





Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education
Example:
 



Polland was the first Eastern European country to turn away from communism;
Text Box: Semicolon (;)
 



other soon followed

2.1.3 Complex Sentence
A complex sentences, contains one independent clause and one (or more) dependent clause. In a complex sentence, one idea is generally more important than the other. We place the more important than the other. We place the more important idea in the independent clause ang the less important idea in the dependent clause (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
It is important to keep in mind the effect and importance of subordination in writing. Sub ordinate clauses carry a great deal of information and meaning, and yet allow the subject and verb named in the independent clause to remain dominant and visible as the main idea. (Fred Obrecht,  2000).



Text Box: Formula: 
Independent Clause	  + Dependent Clause
			Or 
Dependent Clause + Comma(,) + Independent Clause
 








Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education)

Comma Rule:
In a complex sentence, when the dependent clause comes first, separate the clause with a comma. When the independent clause comes first, do not separate them (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
Example:

Anna left the party early    because she was tired.
 



Because she was tired, Anna left the party early.
Text Box: Comma (,)
 



The dependent clause in complex sentence can function as adjectives, as adverbs, or as noun (Gary Lutz, 2005), an Examples:

Text Box: Dependent Clause (Adjective Clause)Text Box: Independent ClausesMary fried the eggs  which her son had brought from the market

Text Box: Dependent Clause (Adverb Clause)Text Box: Independent ClausesMary fried the eggs  when her family finaly came downstairs

Text Box: Dependent Clause (Noun Clause)Text Box: Independent ClausesMary knew that they all  Were very hungry

2.1.4 Compound – Complex Sentence
A compound-complex sentence has at least three clauses, at least two of which are independen clause. It can use almost any combination of dependent and independent clauses. Just be sure that there is at least one independent clause (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
A compound-complex sentence consists of at least two independent clauses and at least one dependent clause. Punctuation patterns for compound-complex sentences vary from thosewith minimal or liaght punctuation to those with heavy punctuation (Gary Lutz, 2005).
when punctuating a compound-complex sentences, apply the rules for both compound and complex sentence. . (Fred Obrecht,  2000).

Text Box: Formula: 
C ompound sentence	  +  Dependent Clause
Or
        Complex sentence + Independent Clause
 








Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education)

Text Box: Complex SentenceExample:
 




When Considering owning a pet, you must calculate the cost,
Text Box: Independent Clause
 


 
or the animal may suffer



2.2 Connecting Words
2.2.1 Coordinating Conjunction
Coordinating conjunctionns connect gramatically equal parts of a sentence. The parts can be words, phrases, or clauses. (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
Coordinating Conjunction
Use
Example
For
Connect a reason to a result
I am a little hungry, for I didn’t eat breakfast this morning
And
Connects equal similiar ideas
John likes to fish and hunt
Nor
Connects two negative sentences
She does not eat meat, nor does she drink milk
But
Connect equal different ideas
I like to eat fish but not to catch them
Or
Connects two equal choices
Do you prefer coffe or tea?
Yet
Connect equal contrasting ideas
It is sunny yet cold
So
Connects a result to a reason
I did not eat breakfast this morning, so I am little hungry
Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education




2.2.2 Subordinating Conjunction
A subordinating conjunction (or subordinator) is the first word in a dependent clause. Common subordinator include the following. (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
Subordinating Conjunction
To tell a time
After
He goes to school after he finishes work
As
Several overcrowded busses passed as they were waiting
As soon as
She felt better as soon as she took the medicine
Before
Before you apply to college, you have to take an exam
Since
It has been a year since I left home
until
We can’t leave the room until everyone finishes the test
When
When you start college, you sometimes have to take a placement test
Whenever
Whenever I don’t sleep well, I feel sick the next day
while
Several overcrowded busses passed while we were waiting
To give a reason
Because
Jack excels at sports because he trains hard
Since
Since she works out daily, Jill is in great condition
As
As they want to compete in a marathon, they run every day
To tell where
Where
I can never remember where I put my house keys
Wherever
A baby animal follows its motherwherever she goes
To make a contrast
Although
I love my brother although we disagree abbout almost everything
Even though
I love my brother even though we disagree abbout almost everything
Though
I love my brother though we disagree abbout almost everything
While
My brother likes classical music, while I prefer hard rock
Whereas
He dresses conservatively, whereas I like to be a little shocking
Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education

2.2.3 Relative Pronouns
Subordinating words for adjective clauses are called relative pronouns (Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007).
Relative Pronouns
To refer to people
Who
People who live in glass houses should not throw stones
Whom
My parents did not aprove of the man whom my sister married
That (informal)
He’s man that everyone in our towb respects
To refer to animals and things
Which
My new computer, which I bought yesterday, stopped working today
That
Yesterday I received an e-mail that I did not understand
To refer to a time
When
Thanksgiving is a time when families travel great distances to be together
Reference: Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education

2.2.4 Conjunctive Adverb
Here are the most commonly used conjunctive adverbs and transitional phrases. (Gary Lutz, 2005).
Function
Conjunctive Adverb
To express an additive relationship
Also, in additionally, furthermore, first, second, finally
To express a contrastive relationship
However, neverthless, on the other hand in contrast
To expresss a cause-and-effect relationship
Therefore, thus, consequently, as a result
To introduce an example
For example, for instance
To intesify
In fact, indeed, after all
To make a comparison
Similiarly, likewisw, in like manner
To express a time relationship
Meanwhile, soon, then, afterward, later, now
To introduce a clarification
In other words, taht is, that is to say
To introduce a conclusion or summary
In conclusion, in short, to sum up, in sum, in brief

Reference: Lutz, Gary and Stevenson, Diane. 2005. Grammar Desk Reference: The Definitive Source for Clear and Correct Writing. Ohio. The Writer’s Digest




B. Correction Symbols
SYMBOL
MEANING
INCORRECT
CORRECT
P
Punctuation
P
 
I live work, and go to school in Walnut.
I live, work, and go to school in Walnut.
^
Missing word
 am
I working in a restaurant
 ^
I am working in a restaurant
=
Capitalization Needed
=
 
The dodgers play in los angeles.
The Dodgers play in Los Angeles.
VT
Verb Tense
VT
 
I never work as a cashier until I got a job there.
I never worked as a cashier until I got the job there.
#SV
Subject-verb Agreement
SV
 
The manager work hard.
The manager works* hard.
*This is just one correct tense that can be used. Depending on the time of the action, conjugate accordingly.
TS
Tense Shift
TS
 

 
After I went to the store, I eat the ice cream I bought.
After I went to the store, I ate the ice cream I bought.
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Close Space
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Every one works hard.
Everyone works hard.
#
Space Needed
#
 
Goingto class is awesome.
Going to class is awesome.
SP
Spelling
SP
 
The maneger is woman.
The manager is a woman.
PL
Plural
PL
 
Apple are the most nutritious fruit.
Apples are the most nutritious fruit.
Unnecessary Word
 
                          
The student she studies all the time.
The student studies all the time
Missing Word
o
 
Please don’t me that question anymore.
Please don’t ask me that question anymore.
WF
Wrong Word Form
WF
 
                          
Her voice is delighted.
Her voice is delightful.
WW
Wrong Word
WW
 
The food is delicious. Besides, the restaurant is always crowded.


WW
 
The apple is delighted.
The food is delicious. Therefore, the restaurant is always crowded.

The apple is delicious.
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Wrong Word Order
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Friday always is our busiest day.
Friday is always our busiest day.
PN
PN
 
Pronoun Reference Error
The restaurant’s specialty is fish.

They are always fresh.
The restaurant’s specialty is fish. It is always fresh.
RO
Run-on (Fused Sentences)
RO
 
Lily is hardworking she is employee of the month.
Lily is hardworking, so she is employee of the month.
OR
Lily is hardworking: therefore, she is employee of the month.
OR
Because Lily is hard worker, she is she is employee of the month.
OR
Lily is employee of the month because she is hard worker.
CS
Comma Splice
Lily is a hard worker, she is employee of the month.
Same as above run-on corrections.
Frag.
Fragment
Frag.
 
She was selected. Because she sets a good example.
She was selected because she sets a good example.
T
Transition Needed
Mt. SAC has many great services.  The Writing Center helps students improve their writing.
Mt. SAC has many great services. For example, the Writing Center helps students improve their writing.
S
Subject Needed
Is open from 6 p.m. until the last customer leaves.
The restaurant is open from 6 p.m. until the last customer leaves.
V
Verb Needed
V
 
                          
The employees on time and work hard.
The employees are on time and work hard.
Prep.
Preposition Needed
Prep.
 
We start serving dinner 6.p.m.
We start serving dinner at 6
Conj.
Conjunction Needed
The garlic shrimp, fried clams,   broiled lobster are the most popular dishes.
The garlic shrimp, fried clams, and broiled lobster are the most popular dishes.
Art.
Article Needed
Art.
 
Art.
 
Diners expect glass of water

when they first sit down at table.
Diners expect a glass of water when they first sit down at the table.
//
Faulty Paralleism
He enjoys watching movies,
//
 
riding his bike, and to go to Disneyland.
He enjoys watching movies, riding his bike, and going to the movies.
Coll
Slang/Colloquialism
Coll
 
I am going 2 class right now
Coll
 

I am going to class right now.

DM
Dangling Modifier
DM
 
Going to the store, the traffic was unusually heavy.
Going to the store, I noticed the traffic was unusually heavy.
OR
I realized the traffic was unusually heavy as I went to the store.
Syn.
Syntax
Syn.
 
I to the store with Dan went.
I went to the store with Dan.
Awk.
Awkward
Awk.
 
The house of my brother is always clean.
My mother’s house is always clean.
ww
Wrong word
                                      ww
The food is delicious. Besides, the restaurant is always crowded
The food delicious. Therefore, the restaurangt is always crowded
Rep.
Repetitive
This error occurs, often times, when a writer repeats the same idea, word(s), concepts, ets.
Take out repetitive material and revise accordingly.
???
Confusing Passage
Ideas are not clear to the reader.
Clarify ideas and revise accordingly.

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Begin a New Paragraph
Paragraph covers unrelated/new topic.
Look for a break in thoughts/ideas and revise accordingly
Indent
The beginning of each paragraph should be indented.
Hit the “tab” button on the keyboard.
Reference:
Oshima, Alice and Hogue, Ann. 2007. Introduction to Academic Writing, Forth Edition. New York. Pearson Education
Maarek, Samia. 2009. The Effectiveness of Correction Symbols as Feedback in Enhancing Self Correction in Writing The Case of First-Year Students. Constantine: Mentouri University



CHAPTER 3
CLOSING
3.1  Conclusion
Sentence is an organized series of words that allows you to make a statement, ask a question, express a thought, offer an oppinion an so on. In writing, a sentence starts with capitalized word and ends with a period, a question mark, or an exclamation mark (Marchel Danesi, Ph.D., 2006).
A sentence represents an eventuality. An eventuality is an action or an event or a state of affairs: something that happens or something taht is. The sentence represents an eventuality by separating out the type of eventuality from the abstract or concrete things which are involved in the eventuality. The type of the eventuality is prototypically represented by the verb (Nigel Fabb, 2005)
To achieve a good quality of writing, needed an effort for perfection in accordance with procedures English writing. To produce the correct of writing, is not easy in the process. Certainly found errors in the way of writing. To investigate faults, takes symbol aimed at marking the wrong points (Maarek, 2009).
         
3.2  Suggestion
From this paper, we hope that the students can understand and know about written structure of a sentence in English



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